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laughALONG! 23rd May

A TUESDAY FEATURE

host: Muskaan Ahuja, Lakshmi Iyer

guest editor: K. Ramesh


a turnip puller

points the way to the road

with a turnip


--- Issa (translation by R B Blyth)



I love the humor in this poem! Please share your views on this haiku and add a haiku which you have read that made you laugh ☺

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
2023년 5월 27일

Nice gentle humour, Ramesh.


Mine here:


evening assembly

a bulbul sings

our prayer song


.

empty cricket field ghosts of yesterday's oohs and aahs ??

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
2023년 5월 28일
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loved the second.

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Raamesh Gowri Raghavan
Raamesh Gowri Raghavan
2023년 5월 26일

Issa paints such a lovely picture.

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Linda Papanicolaou
2023년 5월 25일

Interesting — the version that I knew was a daikon radish, so perhaps westerners don’t know what that is. either way the joke is a really good one

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
2023년 5월 26일
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This is a good one! Of course, this senryu would be lost if we hadn't read Chiyo-ni's famous 'well' ku

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
2023년 5월 24일

#1

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Liked the humor. So too the style of Issa is contagious. Trying one

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sticky summer

scratching her back

with a chapati roller

.

Feedback please

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
2023년 5월 28일
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okay, thanks!

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Rupa Anand
Rupa Anand
2023년 5월 24일

A gust of spring wind —

unhappily—lifts the skirts

of the roof thatcher


He glares back at me

with an ugly, surly face,

this old pond frog


If you are kindly,

they will shit all over you,

happy young sparrows


Kobayashi Issa

translated by Sam Hamill

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K. Ramesh
K. Ramesh
2023년 5월 26일
답글 상대:

These haiku made me smile! Thank you for sharing them...

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