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HAIKUsutradhar: 30th June 2023 Surashree Ulhas Joshi

Updated: Jul 6, 2023

HAIKUsutradhar. weekly prompts

A FRIDAY FEATURE

9th June Lev Hart, the mentor for HAIKUsutradhar, would be pleased to answer your questions and concerns.


hosts: Akila G. & Shreya Narang

the month of May: Surashree Ulhas Joshi


Prompts are based on emotions (called navarasas) that come to the fore when we hear ragas of Indian classical music traditions.


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Shalini Pattabiraman

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................................................................................................................................. Associate Editors, Madhuri Pillai and Akila G. are stepping down for personal reasons. We wish them the very best. Associate Editors, K. Ramesh and Shobhana Kumar stepped down earlier in the year for personal reasons. A huge thank you to all four beautiful poets. Associate Editors, Reid Hepworth (from Oct 2022), Sanjuktaa Asopa (from 15 October 2022) and Hemapriya Chellappan (from Dec 2022) will be joining us. A huge welcome to all these three lovely poets. _()_ ........... For some more exciting news! CHECK THESE FORUMS: Tanka, kyoka and tanka-prose to be posted on TANKA TAKE HOME and Haibun to be posted on THE HAIBUN GALLERY Please do visit: 'triveni spotlight' 'open sky :: SAMVAAD' and 'thinkALONG' Good poems and challenges are posted in these feature forums. ........

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1. From July 2023 onwards only 2 haiku (numbered 1 & 2) per week/per prompt are to be posted on HAIKUsutradhar. The editors are finding it extremely difficult to go through 145 pages of haiku submission every month. 2. Please do not post two poems in one day/in 24 hours ... just one and in total only 2 poems per week from Friday to Friday.

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Or else the original unedited version on your thread will be picked up by us for the selection.


On your comment thread, you need to post your revised final version (if you have one!)


Edited version: Your final version of the poem goes first, so it will be easy for our team to consider that for the haikuKATHA journal.

Original version: Your first version of the poem remains - under your final version.


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Prompt 5:

Raga Keerwani: I thought long and hard about which raga to give as the prompt. I had many options but then I landed on this beautiful raga from the Carnatic tradition. The sweetness of this raga is unparalleled, if you ask me. And the cherry on top…imagine this raga being played by Pt. Shivkumar Sharma who is accompanied by Ustad Zakir Hussain. Nothing can beat that! My dear Trivenians, enjoy this beautiful rendition and I know that you all must have saved the links for future use. Cheers!


Surashree Ulhas Joshi. And a double bonus:

I also open this week to OpenHALL. Enjoy! From the hosts:

A suggestion: please don't listen to this exposition just once and write multiple haiku. Listen to the singer's raga delineation multiple times. Let the raga soak in you. Internalise the movements, curves and leaps and most importantly the emotion it produces.

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Srini
Srini
05 ביולי 2023

#2 [05.07.2023]


post-lunch class

only the lizard is

awake


לייק
Srini
Srini
07 ביולי 2023
בתשובה לפוסט של

Thank you for your comment and suggestion, Billie Dee.


The initial version of the ku (in my head) had "is awake" in L3, as you have suggested. I moved "is" to L2 to make it slightly longer than L1, as well as to build a bit of suspense. However, given the familiarity of the scene, I suppose there is no suspense at all.


All said, I will consider your suggestion.

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Agus Maulana Sunjaya
Agus Maulana Sunjaya
05 ביולי 2023

#2 (5 July 2023)


afternoon breeze

two mating beetles

on the ragweed


(feedback welcome)

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Agus Maulana Sunjaya
Agus Maulana Sunjaya
05 ביולי 2023
בתשובה לפוסט של

Thank you so much, dear @Lev Hart

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Billie Dee
Billie Dee
05 ביולי 2023

#2---4July23


n o alineofants meets a th

e r lineofants lavender twilight


---Billie


feedback welcome


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marilyn ashbaugh
marilyn ashbaugh
04 ביולי 2023

#2 4/7/23 feedback welcome

hailstones the yellow bird's song unsung


hail is a summer kigo

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marilyn ashbaugh
marilyn ashbaugh
05 ביולי 2023
בתשובה לפוסט של

Aparna, thank you!

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marilyn ashbaugh
marilyn ashbaugh
04 ביולי 2023

Surashree,

Thank you for enlightening me with your beautiful selection of ragas and commentaries ❤️

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