HAIKUsutradhar . weekly prompts
A FRIDAY FEATURE
hosts: Akila G. & Shreya Narang
month of april: Marietta McGregor
Picture Prompt . Broken Spider's Web
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haikuKATHA - the monthly journal from Triveni Haikai India!
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Haiku, senryu and haiga/shahai (photo haiku) posted here on this thread will be picked up for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal - haikuKATHA. At the moment we are not looking at found poetry. ..................................................................................................... For some more exciting news! CHECK THESE LINKS ... Tanka, kyoka and tanka-prose to be posted on TANKA TAKE HOME and Haibun to be posted on THE HAIBUN GALLERY It will help you tremendously if you learn to comment on 'triveni spotlight' 'open sky :: SAMVAAD' and 'thinkALONG' Such good poems are posted. ........................................................................................................ The poems you post will also be considered for the haikuKATHA Monthly Journal from December 2021 onwards! Due to to the sudden increase in the activity, here are some quick guidelines, for all the three groups:
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Or else the original unedited version on your thread will be picked up by us.
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Original version: Your first version of the poem remains - under your final version. The way it is shown here.
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The Prompt
This web is very neatly woven except for one area. Did a captive break free? Perhaps a bird blundered into the web. Or was the spider interrupted in its weaving task?
destroyed dream through the hole of a spider 's web her old doll's house
Or
destroyed dream ...
through the hole of a spider's web
old doll's house
he continues to work
go outside like spiders do
family is number one
watering the flowers
between branches
beautiful braid
torn silk ...
the struggle to spin
her world continues
Simple and heartfelt. That's what makes haiku memorable. Here's one by Shiki I thought exemplifies this:
After killing
a spider, how lonely I feel
in the cold of night!
- Masaoka Shiki (translator unknown)