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HAIKUsutradhar : 16th June 2023 Surashree Ulhas Joshi

HAIKUsutradhar. weekly prompts

A FRIDAY FEATURE

16th June Lev Hart, the mentor for HAIKUsutradhar, would be pleased to answer your questions and concerns.


hosts: Akila G. & Shreya Narang

the month of May: Surashree Ulhas Joshi


Prompts are based on emotions (called navarasas) that come to the fore when we hear ragas of Indian classical music traditions.


¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬¬ haikuKATHA - the monthly journal from Triveni Haikai India!

founder/managing editor: Kala Ramesh

associate editors:

Ashish Narain

Firdaus Parvez Hemapriya Chellappan

Priti Aisola Reid Hepworth Sanjuktaa Asopa

Shalini Pattabiraman

Suraja Menon Roychowdhury Vandana Parashar


Haiku, senryu and haiga/shahai (photo haiku) posted here on this thread will be picked up for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal - haikuKATHA At the moment we are not looking at found poetry, rengay and other split sequences. Other than haiga, no photos are to be shared on our blog on account of storage/memory limitations.

................................................................................................................................. Associate Editors, Madhuri Pillai and Akila G. are stepping down for personal reasons. We wish them the very best. Associate Editors, K. Ramesh and Shobhana Kumar stepped down earlier in the year for personal reasons. A huge thank you to all four beautiful poets. Associate Editors, Reid Hepworth (from Oct 2022), Sanjuktaa Asopa (from 15 October 2022) and Hemapriya Chellappan (from Dec 2022) will be joining us. A huge welcome to all these three lovely poets. _()_ ........... For some more exciting news! CHECK THESE FORUMS: Tanka, kyoka and tanka-prose to be posted on TANKA TAKE HOME and Haibun to be posted on THE HAIBUN GALLERY Please do visit: 'triveni spotlight' 'open sky :: SAMVAAD' and 'thinkALONG' Good poems and challenges are posted in these feature forums. ........

The poems you post will also be considered for the haikuKATHA Monthly Journal each month. Due to a sudden increase in activity, here are some quick guidelines, for HAIKUsutradhar:

1. From September 2022 onwards only 3 haiku (numbered 1, 2 & 3) per week/per prompt are to be posted on HAIKUsutradhar. 2. Please do not post two poems in one day/in 24 hours ... just one and in total only 3 poems per week from Friday to Friday.

2. For each poem you share, please comment on ONE other poem which isn't yours!

3. Post only your unpublished, original poems.

4. If poets have NOT ASKED for FEEDBACK, please don't give. 5. Most importantly, please do not post a variety of drafts, along with a request for readers to choose which they like most. Only one poem is to be posted. ............

Post your best haiku and let's have each issue with your best work.

Poems previously published on your webpage or social media will be accepted.

Poems previously published in peer-reviewed or edited journals or anthologies and contest winners that were published elsewhere will not be accepted.


4. IMPORTANT: if any member provides feedback on the poem in the comment section, the poet must decide on the final version and post it on top of the original version.

Or else the original unedited version on your thread will be picked up by us for the selection.


On your comment thread, you need to post your revised final version (if you have one!)


Edited version: Your final version of the poem goes first, so it will be easy for our team to consider that for the haikuKATHA journal.

Original version: Your first version of the poem remains - under your final version.


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The Prompt 3:

openHALL Welcome back! to this space where we create our own prompt, own verse!


Today is the third Friday of this month! and we offer openHALL to open up your muse. The last two weeks we have brought you some beautiful ragas. And for now, you are also welcome to freewheel as that is what openHALL is all about! Either way, do pour in!

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Anju Kishore
Anju Kishore
28. Juni 2023

#1


cracked soil

the thirst for more

highrises

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tejisethi13
tejisethi13
23. Juni 2023

Yoga day special!

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Vijay Prasad
Vijay Prasad
22. Juni 2023

#1;

22 June, 2023

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Vijay Prasad
Vijay Prasad
26. Juni 2023
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Sanjuktaa!

Yes, for a short while i am ...


Glad you liked the haiga

Thanks a million !

🤍

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angiola inglese
angiola inglese
22. Juni 2023

22.06.2023 # 2

broken shell in the nest bombing

I choose this as the definitive version, it's the first one I wrote and it works well in Italian, I wasn't sure it worked in English. Indeed with two lines the second seems like an explanation, as Lev suggested, whom I thank.

or

broken shell in the nest

bombing Feedback welcome .

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angiola inglese
angiola inglese
22. Juni 2023
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Oh sorry , I didn't know about this rule.


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Keith Evetts
Keith Evetts
22. Juni 2023

#2 22 June


beach daiquiris

the deepening blues

further out


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Kanji Dev
Kanji Dev
24. Juni 2023
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I like L2 very much!

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