HAIKUsutradhar . weekly prompts
A FRIDAY FEATURE
Lev Hart becomes the MENTOR for HAIKUsutradhar from 21 November 2022. Thank you.
hosts: Akila G. & Shreya Narang
month of December: Sankara Jayanth
Textual prompt
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haikuKATHA - the monthly journal from Triveni Haikai India!
founder/managing editor: Kala Ramesh
associate editors:
Ashish Narain
Firdaus Parvez
Priti Aisola Reid Hepworth Sanjuktaa Asopa
Shalini Pattabiraman
Suraja Menon Roychowdhury Vandana Parashar
Haiku, senryu and haiga/shahai (photo haiku) posted here on this thread will be picked up for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal - haikuKATHA At the moment we are not looking at found poetry.
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Associate Editors, Madhuri Pillai and Akila G. are stepping down for personal reasons. We wish them the very best.
Associate Editors, K. Ramesh and Shobhana Kumar stepped down earlier in the year for personal reasons.
A huge thank you to all four beautiful poets.
Associate Editors, Reid Hepworth (from Oct 2022), Sanjuktaa Asopa (from 15 October 2022) and Hemapriya Chellappan (from Dec 2022) will be joining us.
A huge welcome to all three lovely poets.
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For some more exciting news! CHECK THESE FORUMS ...
Tanka, kyoka and tanka-prose to be posted on TANKA TAKE HOME
and Haibun to be posted on THE HAIBUN GALLERY
It will help you tremendously if you learn to comment on 'triveni spotlight'
'open sky :: SAMVAAD' and 'thinkALONG'
Such good poems are posted.
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The poems you post will also be considered for the haikuKATHA Monthly Journal each month.
Due to a sudden increase in activity, here are some quick guidelines, for HAIKUsutradhar:
1. From September 2022 onwards only 3 haiku (numbered 1, 2 & 3) per week/per prompt are to be posted on HAIKUsutradhar. 2. Please do not post two poems in one day /24 hours ... just one and in total only 3 poems per week from Friday to Friday.
2. For each poem you share, please comment on ONE other poem which isn't yours!
3. Post only your unpublished, original poems.
4. If poets have NOT ASKED for FEEDBACK, please don't give.
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Post your best haiku and let's have each issue with your best work.
Poems previously published on your webpage or social media will be accepted.
Poems previously published in peer-reviewed or edited journals or anthologies and contest winners that were published elsewhere will not be accepted.
4. IMPORTANT: if any member provides feedback on the poem in the comment section, the poet must decide on the final version and post it on top of the original version.
Or else the original unedited version on your thread will be picked up by us.
On your comment thread, you need to post your revised final version (if you have one!)
Edited version: Your final version of the poem goes first, so it will be easy for our team to consider that for the haikuKATHA journal.
Original version: Your first version of the poem remains - under your final version. The way it is shown here.
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The Prompt
House on a Hill Station
Imagine yourself staying in a house nestled between mountains in a lush spread of nature. Imagine you have nothing serious to worry about, no, just imagine it for a while even if it is unrealistic. You wake up on a cold day (or any other weather setting you feel like imagining) and walk out of the house. What you see, where you go and what you do - imagine yourself in such a setting and write a haiku that is born from this exercise of imagination.
#2
Edited -
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bright day...
she steps out
in a smiley dress
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Original -
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she steps out with a smile dawn sky
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Feedback please.
#2. 23.12.2022
Revised, thank you Kala ma'am, and Ron!
crashing waves
white against the cliff...
my thoughts stand still
Original:
blue waves
crashing white against the cliff...
i stare down lost in thoughts
(Feedback welcome)
#1
sun-torn curtain
rays tearing the room
rising steam from hot te
Feedback most appreciated
Last year at this time, the week ended with 199 comments. This week, we've got 586 comments so far, and the week's not over. I think that's pretty impressive.
No. 3 – Dec 22, 2022
mountain pines
shift into shadow . . .
winter sunset
*your comments welcome