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HAIKUsutradhar: 13th October 2023 Anju Kishore

Updated: Oct 13, 2023

HAIKUsutradhar. weekly prompts

A FRIDAY FEATURE

13th October


Host: Kala Ramesh

Group Mentor: Lev Hart Prompter for August: Anju Kishore

OUR MISSION: 1) To provide a new poetry workshop each Friday, along with a prompt.

2) To select haiku, senryu, and haiga each month for the journal, haikuKATHA. Each issue will select poems that were posted in this forum from the 3rd of the previous month to the 2nd of the current month.

SUBMISSION GUIDELINES


A Quick Note: Starting with our October issue (issue 24), haikuKATHA will only consider haiga and tanka-art submissions that showcase your original artwork or photos. No more using stuff from free sites or AI-generated images, because we want you to boost your creativity!


But don't worry, we're all about collaboration. Because we know not everyone can draw or take great pictures. If you team up with an artist or photographer and we accept your work for publication, both of you will get credit for the masterpiece you've created. Make sure it’s their original work as well and they are not restricted by other publications to share them.


Just remember, it's on you to get permission from the artist/photographer before posting their stuff. We won't be responsible for any copyright issues. So, please keep these changes in mind. Have fun!


Important: Since we're swamped with submissions, and our editors are only human, mistakes can happen. Please, please, remember to put your name, followed by your country, below each poem, even after revisions. It helps our editors; they won't have to type it in, saving them from potential typos. Thanks a ton!

1. Post a maximum of two verses per week, from Friday to Friday, numbered 1 & 2. Post only one haiku in a day, in 24 hours.

2. Only post unpublished verses --- nothing that has appeared in peer-reviewed or edited journals, anthologies, your webpage, social media, etc.

3. Only post original verses.

4. For each poem you post, comment on one other person’s poem.

5. Give feedback only to those poets who have requested it.

6. Do not post a variety of drafts, along with a request for readers to choose which they like most. Only one poem is to appear in each original post.

7. Post each revision, if you have any, above the original. The top version will be your submission to haikuKATHA. Do not delete the original post.

8. Do not submit found poetry or split sequences.

9. Do not post photos, except for haiga.

10. With haiga, post details re: the source of the visual image.

Poems that do not follow the guidelines may be deleted.


Founder/Managing Editor of haikuKATHA Monthly Journal: Kala Ramesh

Associate Editors: Ashish Narain Firdaus Parvez Priti Aisola Sanjuktaa Asopa Shalini Pattabiraman Suraja Menon Roychowdhury Vandana Parashar Vidya Shankar ***

PROMPT:


Week 2

Does writing haiku tuck one away in an ivory tower or can haijin be as socially aware and as expressive of social issues as any poet? This week I invite you to write about socio-cultural issues and perspectives. Our intention here is not to influence opinion, enflame emotion or attempt to bring about change. A haiku stirs the soul when it “says something without saying it” as scholar Kenneth Yasuda puts it. Here are some that do just that.


coming with frost

the wind lies down to sleep with

a deserted child


Basho The Complete Haiku sourced from The Haiku Foundation Digital Library



plucked jasmine a funeral on my hands Kala Ramesh The Heron’s Nest, March 2022.

child bride the pleats of her saree come loose

Firdaus Parvez Muse India, Vasant Ritu Special Haikai Edition 2023

Winning Poem, Muse India Triveni Award 2023

Waiting to read your poems.

Anju Kishore.


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Belfast hangover still wary of revealing

my religion


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John Pappas
John Pappas
Oct 18, 2023

#2


10.18.23


thrashing limbs

the drone pilot's

fitful sleep


John Pappas, USA


Feedback welcome.

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Powerful!

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Baisali
Baisali
Oct 18, 2023

#1

18/10/23


Edited: (with thanks to @Lev Hart)


window shopping

a barefoot boy stares

at a family


Original:


window shopping

barefoot boy stares

at a family


~ Baisali Chatterjee Dutt

Kolkata, India


Feedback always welcome


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Oct 18, 2023
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"barefoot boy" requires an article.

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C.X. Turner
C.X. Turner
Oct 18, 2023

18/10/23 #2


falling leaf

a lull before the next

detonation


C.X. Turner, UK


(feedback welcome)

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lindalee004
lindalee004
Oct 17, 2023

Final revision.


homeless

sharing hopelessness

with immigrants


id like to thank everyone that offered help. Lev thank you.


#2 redo

homeless

sharing space

the immigrants


[hoping this clarifies where I was going]

#1 original

homeless people - shortage

we now have to

import more

Linda L Ludwig, USA


comments welcome

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lindalee004
lindalee004
Oct 19, 2023
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Thank you Jan 🤗

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