HAIKUsutradhar . weekly prompts
A FRIDAY FEATURE
Lev Hart becomes the MENTOR for HAIKUsutradhar from 21 November 2022. Thank you.
hosts: Akila G. & Shreya Narang
month of February: Ravi Kiran
Picture prompt
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haikuKATHA - the monthly journal from Triveni Haikai India!
founder/managing editor: Kala Ramesh
associate editors:
Ashish Narain
Firdaus Parvez Hemapriya Chellappan
Priti Aisola Reid Hepworth Sanjuktaa Asopa
Shalini Pattabiraman
Suraja Menon Roychowdhury Vandana Parashar
Haiku, senryu and haiga/shahai (photo haiku) posted here on this thread will be picked up for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal - haikuKATHA At the moment we are not looking at found poetry.
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Associate Editors, Madhuri Pillai and Akila G. are stepping down for personal reasons. We wish them the very best.
Associate Editors, K. Ramesh and Shobhana Kumar stepped down earlier in the year for personal reasons.
A huge thank you to all four beautiful poets.
Associate Editors, Reid Hepworth (from Oct 2022), Sanjuktaa Asopa (from 15 October 2022) and Hemapriya Chellappan (from Dec 2022) will be joining us.
A huge welcome to all these three lovely poets.
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For some more exciting news! CHECK THESE FORUMS ...
Tanka, kyoka and tanka-prose to be posted on TANKA TAKE HOME
and Haibun to be posted on THE HAIBUN GALLERY
It will help you tremendously if you learn to comment on 'triveni spotlight'
'open sky :: SAMVAAD' and 'thinkALONG'
Such good poems are posted.
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The poems you post will also be considered for the haikuKATHA Monthly Journal each month.
Due to a sudden increase in activity, here are some quick guidelines, for HAIKUsutradhar:
1. From September 2022 onwards only 3 haiku (numbered 1, 2 & 3) per week/per prompt are to be posted on HAIKUsutradhar. 2. Please do not post two poems in one day /24 hours ... just one and in total only 3 poems per week from Friday to Friday.
2. For each poem you share, please comment on ONE other poem which isn't yours!
3. Post only your unpublished, original poems.
4. If poets have NOT ASKED for FEEDBACK, please don't give.
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Post your best haiku and let's have each issue with your best work.
Poems previously published on your webpage or social media will be accepted.
Poems previously published in peer-reviewed or edited journals or anthologies and contest winners that were published elsewhere will not be accepted.
4. IMPORTANT: if any member provides feedback on the poem in the comment section, the poet must decide on the final version and post it on top of the original version.
Or else the original unedited version on your thread will be picked up by us.
On your comment thread, you need to post your revised final version (if you have one!)
Edited version: Your final version of the poem goes first, so it will be easy for our team to consider that for the haikuKATHA journal.
Original version: Your first version of the poem remains - under your final version. The way it is shown here.
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The Prompt
Spiral Staircase
It is indeed my privilege to give the prompts for the month of Feb 2023. I will be using photographs that I have taken over the years for this. This first one is what I had shot in Bangalore. This was a scene that I used to see from a flyover near my house almost daily in my office commute. It took a bit of an effort as to get this shot I had to be not just in the perfect place but also chose the correct time of the day so that I staircase and the shadow were of the exact same size.
As a Haijin, I can so relate to this as often our thought spiral into many creative directions. The struggle often is to blend and channelize those creative energies into three lines (or even one!). Let this photo inspire you and may a haiku spawn.
#2 17th feb ‘23
this 4 am brain . . .
even the nightjar knows
to be quiet
Feedback welcome :))
#2
after
the
leaves
fall
just
me
left
hanging
on
comments alway welcome
#3 16/2/23
Feedback welcome
ramp walk...
she conceals
fresh bruises
#1 Feb 16
Revised. Thank you, Reid and Vidya
timber war
the spinning fall
of a spider
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timber war
the spinning fall
of a homeless spider
(Critique most welcome)