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HAIKUsutradhar : 10th February 2023

HAIKUsutradhar . weekly prompts

A FRIDAY FEATURE

Lev Hart becomes the MENTOR for HAIKUsutradhar from 21 November 2022. Thank you.


hosts: Akila G. & Shreya Narang

month of February: Ravi Kiran



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haikuKATHA - the monthly journal from Triveni Haikai India!

founder/managing editor: Kala Ramesh

associate editors:

Ashish Narain

Firdaus Parvez Hemapriya Chellappan

Priti Aisola Reid Hepworth Sanjuktaa Asopa

Shalini Pattabiraman

Suraja Menon Roychowdhury Vandana Parashar


Haiku, senryu and haiga/shahai (photo haiku) posted here on this thread will be picked up for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal - haikuKATHA At the moment we are not looking at found poetry.

................................................................................................................................. Associate Editors, Madhuri Pillai and Akila G. are stepping down for personal reasons. We wish them the very best. Associate Editors, K. Ramesh and Shobhana Kumar stepped down earlier in the year for personal reasons. A huge thank you to all four beautiful poets. Associate Editors, Reid Hepworth (from Oct 2022), Sanjuktaa Asopa (from 15 October 2022) and Hemapriya Chellappan (from Dec 2022) will be joining us. A huge welcome to all these three lovely poets. _()_ ................................................................................................................................. For some more exciting news! CHECK THESE FORUMS ... Tanka, kyoka and tanka-prose to be posted on TANKA TAKE HOME and Haibun to be posted on THE HAIBUN GALLERY It will help you tremendously if you learn to comment on 'triveni spotlight' 'open sky :: SAMVAAD' and 'thinkALONG' Such good poems are posted. ................................................................................................................................... The poems you post will also be considered for the haikuKATHA Monthly Journal each month. Due to a sudden increase in activity, here are some quick guidelines, for HAIKUsutradhar:

1. From September 2022 onwards only 3 haiku (numbered 1, 2 & 3) per week/per prompt are to be posted on HAIKUsutradhar. 2. Please do not post two poems in one day /24 hours ... just one and in total only 3 poems per week from Friday to Friday.

2. For each poem you share, please comment on ONE other poem which isn't yours!

3. Post only your unpublished, original poems.

4. If poets have NOT ASKED for FEEDBACK, please don't give. ....................................................................................................................................

Post your best haiku and let's have each issue with your best work.

Poems previously published on your webpage or social media will be accepted.

Poems previously published in peer-reviewed or edited journals or anthologies and contest winners that were published elsewhere will not be accepted.


4. IMPORTANT: if any member provides feedback on the poem in the comment section, the poet must decide on the final version and post it on top of the original version.


Or else the original unedited version on your thread will be picked up by us.


On your comment thread, you need to post your revised final version (if you have one!)


Edited version: Your final version of the poem goes first, so it will be easy for our team to consider that for the haikuKATHA journal.

Original version: Your first version of the poem remains - under your final version. The way it is shown here.


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The Prompt



Spiral Staircase


It is indeed my privilege to give the prompts for the month of Feb 2023. I will be using photographs that I have taken over the years for this. This first one is what I had shot in Bangalore. This was a scene that I used to see from a flyover near my house almost daily in my office commute. It took a bit of an effort as to get this shot I had to be not just in the perfect place but also chose the correct time of the day so that I staircase and the shadow were of the exact same size.


As a Haijin, I can so relate to this as often our thought spiral into many creative directions. The struggle often is to blend and channelize those creative energies into three lines (or even one!). Let this photo inspire you and may a haiku spawn.

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Firdaus Parvez
Firdaus Parvez
Feb 17, 2023

#2 17th feb ‘23


this 4 am brain . . .

even the nightjar knows

to be quiet


Feedback welcome :))

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Firdaus Parvez
Firdaus Parvez
Feb 17, 2023
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Thanks Reid. No worries that’s usually my writing hour. If my muse favours that time nothing can be done 😃

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
Feb 17, 2023
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There is a limit on storage space on all sites. We are in our second year - I need to be clear on these things! Will ask Rohan.

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Bryan Rickert
Bryan Rickert
Feb 16, 2023

#2


after


the


leaves


fall


just


me


left


hanging


on


comments alway welcome

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Reid Hepworth
Reid Hepworth
Feb 16, 2023
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Brilliant! Love it!

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Amoolya Kamalnath
Feb 16, 2023

#3 16/2/23

Feedback welcome


ramp walk...

she conceals

fresh bruises

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Amoolya Kamalnath
Feb 17, 2023
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Thank you, Kala!

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Anju Kishore
Anju Kishore
Feb 16, 2023

#1 Feb 16


Revised. Thank you, Reid and Vidya


timber war

the spinning fall

of a spider


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timber war

the spinning fall

of a homeless spider


(Critique most welcome)

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Reid Hepworth
Reid Hepworth
Feb 17, 2023
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I think “timber war” speaks to loss trees and habitats. I hope that people get it.

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