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HAIKUsutradhar : 07 October 2022

HAIKUsutradhar . weekly prompts

A FRIDAY FEATURE

hosts: Akila G. & Shreya Narang

month of October: Kashiana Singh



Textual prompt


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haikuKATHA - the monthly journal from Triveni Haikai India!

founder/managing editor: Kala Ramesh

associate editors:

Ashish Narain

Firdaus Parvez

Priti Aisola Reid Hepworth Sanjuktaa Asopa

Shalini Pattabiraman

Suraja Menon Roychowdhury Vandana Parashar


Haiku, senryu and haiga/shahai (photo haiku) posted here on this thread will be picked up for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal - haikuKATHA. At the moment we are not looking at found poetry.

................................................................................................................................. Associate Editors, Madhuri Pillai and Akila G. are stepping down for personal reasons. We wish them the very best. Earlier in the year Associate Editors, K. Ramesh and Shobhana Kumar also stepped down for personal reasons. A huge thank you to all four beautiful poets. Associate Editors, Reid Hepworth (from Oct 2022), Sanjuktaa Asopa (from 15 October 2022) and Hemapriya Chellappan (from Dec 2022) will be joining us. A huge welcome to all three lovely poets. _()_ ................................................................................................................................. For some more exciting news! CHECK THESE FORUMS ... Tanka, kyoka and tanka-prose to be posted on TANKA TAKE HOME and Haibun to be posted on THE HAIBUN GALLERY It will help you tremendously if you learn to comment on 'triveni spotlight' 'open sky :: SAMVAAD' and 'thinkALONG' Such good poems are posted. ................................................................................................................................... The poems you post will also be considered for the haikuKATHA Monthly Journal each month. Due to a sudden increase in activity, here are some quick guidelines, for HAIKUsutradhar:

1. From September 2022 onwards only 3 haiku (numbered 1, 2 & 3) per week/per prompt are to be posted on HAIKUsutradhar. 2. Please do not post two poems in a day ... just one and in total only 3 poems per week from Friday to Friday.

2. For each poem you share, please comment on ONE other poem which isn't yours!

3. Post only your unpublished, original poems.

4. If poets have NOT ASKED for FEEDBACK, please don't give. _()_

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Post your best haiku and let's have each issue with your best work.

Poems previously published on your webpage or social media will be accepted.

Poems previously published in peer-reviewed or edited journals or anthologies as well as contest winners that were published elsewhere as such, will not be accepted.


4. IMPORTANT: if any member provides feedback on the poem in the comment section, the poet must decide on the final version and post it on top of the original version.


Or else the original unedited version on your thread will be picked up by us.


On your comment thread, you need to post your revised final version (if you have one!)


Edited version: Your final version of the poem goes first, so it will be easy for our team to consider that for the haikuKATHA journal.

Original version: Your first version of the poem remains - under your final version. The way it is shown here.


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The Prompt


Earth Day - On the fiftieth anniversary of the first Earth Day in 2022.

The most critical living systems on Earth are dying: the Amazon and the African rain forests are only a shade of themselves and abnormally prone to fire. But within this there is still the power of zooming one’s lens as a poet to the most beautiful, minute and hope inspiring details – the animals against each other’s bodies, the large oaks, the lichens and moss, the stream hidden and protected, the life beneath the surface and within each other.


Find your ecocentric haiku and post them, write one or share someone’s work – Let us spend some time together observing our forests and peering into the tiniest details.

Here is my effort –


acquired taste ...

the metallic aroma

of forest slush Kashiana Singh

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Billie Dee
Billie Dee
15. Okt. 2022

Revision:


a fallen log

riddled with grubs

harvest moon


Original:


#1---08Oct22


fallen log

the grubs dancing

within

__________

Feedback welcome


---Billie


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neena singh
neena singh
15. Okt. 2022

This is lovely Bryan!

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Bryan Rickert
Bryan Rickert
13. Okt. 2022

#2


second chances

the branch I meant to trim

blooms first


comments always welcome

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Disha Upadhyay
Disha Upadhyay
14. Okt. 2022
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Love it!

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
13. Okt. 2022

#2, 13-10-2022

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Earth Day —

a child's placard reads

Save planet! Save Home!

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Baisali
Baisali
13. Okt. 2022

Poem #3

13/10/22


Edited: (with thanks to @Ashish Narain)


broken shells...

hermit crab

still house-hunting


Originl:


broken shells...

hermit crabs

still house-hunting


Feedback always welcome 🦀

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Baisali
Baisali
15. Okt. 2022
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Thank you so much, my dearest @neenadi 🌷

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