haikaiTALKS: Japanese aesthetics - a saturday gathering_under the banyan tree
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16th September 2023
Japanese aesthetics: wabi
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Wabi: Simple, Austere Beauty
In the aforementioned Essays in Idleness Kenkō asks, “Are we to look at cherry blossoms only in full bloom, at the moon only when it is cloudless?” (Keene, 115). If for the Buddhists the basic condition is impermanence, to privilege as consummate only certain moments in the eternal flux may signify a refusal to accept that basic condition. Kenkō continues: “To long for the moon while looking on the rain, to lower the blinds and be unaware of the passing of the spring—these are even more deeply moving. Branches about to blossom or gardens strewn with faded flowers are worthier of our admiration.” This is an example of the idea of wabi, understated beauty, which was first distinguished and praised when expressed in poetry. But it is in the art of tea, and the context of Zen, that the notion of wabi is most fully developed.
Wabi means that even in straitened circumstances no thought of hardship arises. Even amid insufficiency, one is moved by no feeling of want. Even when faced with failure, one does not brood over injustice. If you find being in straitened circumstances to be confining, if you lament insufficiency as privation, if you complain that things have been ill-disposed—this is not wabi. (Hirota, 275)
Notes taken from Britannica and other sources.
Keiko Izawa adds this:
In order to dig into wabi a little more deeply, I’d like to add these information which might be worthy of attention.
Murata Shukō (founder of wabi-cha style tea ceremony) wrote:
The moon seen between the clouds is more beautiful than a full moon shining brightly. As this sentence shows, in wabicha he insisted on the spirit of enjoying the beauty of things lacking. and another piece of info:
Originally, wabi was a word that expressed a state of mind and body that should be avoided, but as the medieval period approached, beauty came to be found in the inadequate state that should be avoided, and a new aesthetic sense that expressed the beauty of inadequacy was developed. In late Muromachi period (1333-1573), the understanding of wabi developed rapidly in connection with the tea ceremony, and the conventional theory is that Matsuo Basho of the Edo period (1603-1867) thoroughly developed the beauty of wabi.
Thus, wabi has another aspect of aesthetic sense other than the appreciation of simple/modest/austere things. Hope these could help you some more…
~~~~~~~~~~~~~ To Lev Hart’s question:
"The moon seen between the clouds is more beautiful than a full moon shining brightly." Do you mean "between" or behind the clouds?
Keiko replies:
The original Japanese word says “between”. I think it’s a moon somewhat blurred and partly seen between the clouds, not like that blurred as a whole behind the clouds.
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Thank you, Keiko. _()_
Your presence here is invaluable.
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Sample: beneath leaf mold
stone
cool
stone
marlene mountain
old towel folding it again autumn evening
marlene mountain
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This will be your second haiku with wabi
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More thinking about wabi and mono no aware. I have begun reading Einstein’s Century by Akito Arima (translations by Emiko Miyashita and Lee Gurga). I was immediately struck by these two haiku from Dr. Arima’s visit to Italy:
hydrangeas—
in the antique shop
the silver of spoons
works in Latin
fill the rare book store—
a spring cap
Although there’s a reference to antiques / antiquity in both, the first feels very much in the present, while the second has a strong sense of pathos and loss.
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#3, revised, 21/9
New Year's Day
the geriatric ward lit
with strip lights
Lakshmi Iyer
India
19/9, original
morning breeze
the geriatric ward lit
with new year strip lights
Lakshmi Iyer
India
feedback please
Poem 3 ~ trying a duostich
through bare birch
the moon now and then
feedback welcome on the presence of wabi ?
#3
white wagtail’s song
a blind couple on the bench
looking at the sea
Keiko Izawa
Japan
feedback appreciated.