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haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering! 9th August 2025

haikaiTALKS: Japanese aesthetics: Ka-chō-fū-getsu: Part 1 – flowers/blossoms|a saturday gathering under the banyan tree


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Special Guest Poet: Keiko Izawa

host: Srinivasa Sambangi 9th August 2025


haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering under the banyan tree

Your Guest Poet for AUGUST for haikaiTALKS: Keiko Izawa


haikaiTALKS August 2025

 

Ka-chō-fū-getsu   Part 1 – Flowers/ blossoms

(花・鳥・風・月)

Ka (flower) - chō (bird) - fū (wind) - getsu (moon) is a four-character idiom that encapsulates the beauty of nature and its cyclical patterns. Specifically, "flower" symbolizes the beauty of spring, "bird" represents the vitality of living creatures and the scenery of early summer, "wind" signifies the shifting of the seasons, and "moon" refers to the beauty of an autumn evening. This idea is often used to create art and poetry that reflects the beauty of nature throughout the four seasons. These natural elements frequently convey human emotions and feelings.

 

This week, you are requested to write up to two haiku with the theme of  FLOWER/ BLOSSOM, inspired by the concept of kachōfūgetsu. Please try to incorporate aesthetic elements such as wabi, sabi, yūgen, mujō, miyabi, shibumi, karumi, etc. in the ma. Select a flower kigo from the link below.  Your local flower kigo is also welcome.

 

Samples:

 

菜の花や 月は東に 日は西に

nanohana ya / tsuki wa higashi ni / hi wa nishi ni

 

canola flowers –

the moon in the east

the sun in the west

            ~ Buson

 

野に出れば 人みなやさし 桃の花 

no ni dere ba / hito mina yasashi / momo no hana

 

out in the field

everyone kind …

peach blossoms


~ Takano Sojū

 

紫陽花や 昨日の誠 今日の噓 

ajisai ya / kinō no makoto / kyō no uso

 

hydrangeas –

yesterday’s faith

today’s lie


              ~ Shiki

 

向日葵や もののあはれを 寄せつけず 

himawari ya / mono no aware o / yose tsukezu

 

sunflowers –

mono no aware

kept at bay


              ~ Suzuki Masojo

 

 

“A Dictionary of Haiku Classified by Season Words with Traditional and Modern Methods,” by Jane Reichhold:

 

Indian subcontinent SAIJIKI:

 

The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words:

 

The World Kigo Database:

 

The Yuki Teikei Haiku Season Word List:

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Thanks, Keiko! Another beautiful post. Thanks a lot.

I hope our poets take the challenge and create a haiku on these lines! Keenly looking ahead to this month.

Greatly indebted to you.

Dear Members,

Please give your feedback on others' commentary and poems, too. _()_

We are continuing haikaiTALKS in a grand manner!

Keep writing and commenting! _kala

164 Comments


Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
Aug 14, 2025

the becomingness of marigold first light


Kala Ramesh #2 Feedback welcome

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Mohua
Mohua
Aug 14, 2025

#1


chameleon

the many shades

of amaltas


Mohua Maulik, India


Feedback appreciated.


Keiko, i had written this ku earlier but after your comment, i am rather apprehensive about whether this would also be disrespecting the kigo? Looking for guidance and suggestions so that i am able to understand and avoid such mistakes in future. If it is, i will be happy to delete this ku as well. Thank you for your time and patience.

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Mohua
Mohua
Aug 15, 2025
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Thank you again Keiko.

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Fatma Zohra Habis
Aug 14, 2025

#2 14/08

Revision 1 Thanks a lot Keiko 🌺


sunset almond blossoms—

remnants of light

on mother’s apron


Fatma Zohra Habis/Algeria


The original


almond blossoms—

light clings at dawn

to mother’s apron


Feedback welcome 🌹

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Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
Aug 14, 2025
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You’re so welcome, Fatma.

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Fatma Zohra Habis
Aug 12, 2025

#1 12/08


Revision 1 Thanks a lot Keiko 🌺


a bumble bee

humming to itself…

sunflowers


Fatma Zohra Habis/ Algeria


The original


a bumblebee flutters

among sunflowers

humming to itself


Feedback welcome 🌺

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Fatma Zohra Habis
Aug 15, 2025
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Thank you so much Kanjini ❤️ 🌺

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Kanjini Devi
Kanjini Devi
Aug 12, 2025

Revision with many thanks to Keiko


along the banks

of a harbour

kōwhai


Kanjini Devi, NZ


#2 - 12/08/25


bursting along

the banks of a harbour

kōwhai blooms


Kanjini Devi, NZ

feedback welcome


kōwhai is a kigo for Spring 

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Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
Aug 14, 2025
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Good revision, Kanjini. It has more quiet elegance in the Ma.

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