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haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering! 6th December 2025 Billee Dee

haikaiTALKS: The Quiet Edges of Presence: a Winter Sabi Series|a saturday gathering under the banyan tree


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Special Guest Poet: Billie Dee

host: Srinivasa Sambangi 6th December 2025


haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering under the banyan tree

December's Guest Poet: Billie Dee And she's helping us view Sabi from a fresh perspective!


haikaiTALKS 


The Quiet Edges of Presence: a Winter Sabi Series

Across hemispheres, winter is less a single season than a mood—a thinning of light, a sharpening of textures, a soft deceleration at the edges of our days. Whether cold or warm, wet or dry, winter is when presence becomes more audible in the small, unguarded moments: thresholds of identity, the residue of shared rooms, the grain of familiar tasks, and the slowed breath of living things.

Sabi is not about sorrow.  It is the felt texture of time brushing lightly against us. This new four-week cycle invites you into those subtle thresholds where nothing dramatic happens, yet everything is quietly revealed.



December 6 — Edges of Identity: Language, Ink, and the Unseen Hand


Presence often arrives where the “I” loosens—where perception overtakes identity, where the world completes something we began. Speech, shadow, and morning light each open a small door into that liminal zone.


im-mi-grant. . . the way English tastes on my tongue      — Chen-ou Liu


on the manuscript the shadow of a butterfly finishes the poem      — Nick Virgilio


the mirror when no one is looking first light      — Bill Kenney

PROMPT:  Find a moment today when you hover between roles or when something non-human lightly alters your task. Write a haiku where you are not the protagonist. Let the threshold reveal itself.

_()_ Namaste, Billee Dee


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“A Dictionary of Haiku Classified by Season Words with Traditional and Modern Methods,” by Jane Reichhold:

 

Indian subcontinent SAIJIKI:

 

The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words:

 

The World Kigo Database:

 

The Yuki Teikei Haiku Season Word List:

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Thanks, Billie. Your notes, the examples you have given and your prompt are so breathtakingly stunning. Thank you so much. I hope more poets try to see 'wabi' the way you have so superbly expressed.

Dear Members,

Waiting for your responses.

Please provide your feedback on others' commentary and poems as well. _()_

We are continuing haikaiTALKS in a grand manner!

Keep writing and commenting! _kala

46 Comments


Kalyanee
Kalyanee
5 hours ago

06.12.2025

#1


wintry shades

leaves heavy with dust

and dew drops


Kalyanee Arandhara

Assam, India


Feedback most welcome

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Kalyanee
Kalyanee
5 hours ago

Wonderful enriching prompt. Thank you so much for the great effort.

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joanna ashwell
joanna ashwell
8 hours ago

#1

 

landscape photo

the sudden dip

of a swift

 

Joanna Ashwell

UK

 

Feedback welcome

 

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Kanjini Devi
Kanjini Devi
3 hours ago
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I like the surprise of movement here, Joanna.

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
8 hours ago

#1, 6/12


hospice sky

the heart-shaped balloons

kiss the autumn sun


Lakshmi Iyer, India

Feedback welcome


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joanna ashwell
joanna ashwell
8 hours ago
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A tender and beautiful visual Lakshmi.

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Alfred Booth
Alfred Booth
12 hours ago

#1

the stone staircase

grips winter’s bluster

a new lightbulb


Alfred Booth

Lyon, France

(feedback welcome)

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Alfred Booth
Alfred Booth
8 hours ago
Replying to

Thank you, Joanna. In my old building, there is a stone staircase and an open courtyard which means the building is always frigid in the colder months.

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