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haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering! 6th December 2025 Billee Dee

haikaiTALKS: The Quiet Edges of Presence: a Winter Sabi Series|a saturday gathering under the banyan tree


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Special Guest Poet: Billie Dee

host: Srinivasa Sambangi 6th December 2025


haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering under the banyan tree

December's Guest Poet: Billie Dee And she's helping us view Sabi from a fresh perspective!


haikaiTALKS 


The Quiet Edges of Presence: a Winter Sabi Series

Across hemispheres, winter is less a single season than a mood—a thinning of light, a sharpening of textures, a soft deceleration at the edges of our days. Whether cold or warm, wet or dry, winter is when presence becomes more audible in the small, unguarded moments: thresholds of identity, the residue of shared rooms, the grain of familiar tasks, and the slowed breath of living things.

Sabi is not about sorrow.  It is the felt texture of time brushing lightly against us. This new four-week cycle invites you into those subtle thresholds where nothing dramatic happens, yet everything is quietly revealed.



December 6 — Edges of Identity: Language, Ink, and the Unseen Hand


Presence often arrives where the “I” loosens—where perception overtakes identity, where the world completes something we began. Speech, shadow, and morning light each open a small door into that liminal zone.


im-mi-grant. . . the way English tastes on my tongue      — Chen-ou Liu


on the manuscript the shadow of a butterfly finishes the poem      — Nick Virgilio


the mirror when no one is looking first light      — Bill Kenney

PROMPT:  Find a moment today when you hover between roles or when something non-human lightly alters your task. Write a haiku where you are not the protagonist. Let the threshold reveal itself.

_()_ Namaste, Billee Dee


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“A Dictionary of Haiku Classified by Season Words with Traditional and Modern Methods,” by Jane Reichhold:

 

Indian subcontinent SAIJIKI:

 

The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words:

 

The World Kigo Database:

 

The Yuki Teikei Haiku Season Word List:

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Thanks, Billie. Your notes, the examples you have given and your prompt are so breathtakingly stunning. Thank you so much. I hope more poets try to see 'wabi' the way you have so superbly expressed.

Dear Members,

Waiting for your responses.

Please provide your feedback on others' commentary and poems as well. _()_

We are continuing haikaiTALKS in a grand manner!

Keep writing and commenting! _kala

126 Comments


C.X. Turner
C.X. Turner
Dec 19, 2025

19/12/25


christmas lights

the workmen nod

at the reindeer


C.X. Turner, U.K.

(feedback always welcome)

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Billie Dee
Billie Dee
Dec 11, 2025

#1—11Dec25


sun scoured—

last year’s pumpkin

holding rain


—Billie Dee

Tacoma, Washington, USA


(feedback always welcome)

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Lorraine Haig
Dec 11, 2025

#2


bones in sand

a breeze whistles through

dune grass


Lorraine Haig, Aust.

Feedback welcome.

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Lorraine Haig
Dec 13, 2025
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Thank you so much Billie.

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
Dec 11, 2025

hands

that once held the seeds …

cremation ghat


Kala Ramesh #2


Feedback welcome.

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
Dec 13, 2025
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Thank you, Lorraine. This is dedicated to all our farmers, who toil in the fields, for India is primarily an agricultural economy. The beginning of life interpretation is beautiful, Larraine.

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Kalyanee
Kalyanee
Dec 11, 2025

11.12.2025

#2


autumn bareness

still warm

that part of the shelf


Kalyanee Arandhara

Assam, India


Feedback most welcome

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Kalyanee
Kalyanee
Dec 12, 2025
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I'm just elated to get your feedback, Billie. Thank you so much. 🙏

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