haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering! 30th May 2026
- Srinivas Sambangi
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haikaiTALKS: time in haiku|a saturday gathering under the banyan tree
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haikaiTALKS: a Saturday gathering under the banyan tree
30th May 2026
Time in haiku
“Time is nothing but an abstract measure of motion. We are living in an eternal now”
--Alan Watts
Haiku is all about capturing a fleeting moment in time. It’s about recognising the moments that slip away before we know it. But this week, we wish to explore time as a unit, a measurement. Time as a unit allows us to synchronise social activities, quantify distances, and sequence of events. Without measuring precise time, essential worldly systems will collapse. Time is something that can’t be touched or felt, seen or heard but it’s always there slipping through our moments of joy and sadness.
There are several haiku written by the masters as well as contemporary writers about time as a measurement.
At a riceless time,
The gourd receptacle holds
An ominaeshi.
Basho (tr. By David C. Buchanan)
“Riceless times” for peasants and the poor were frequent in seventeenth-century Japan. People then would eat barley, sweet potatoes, or weeds from the field. The ominaeshi, a flower known for its fragile beauty is edible. Basho was very poor and depended on his friends and disciples for food. A receptacle made from a gourd was kept outside his dwelling into which rice and other articles of food were put by the poet’s admirers.
(“riceless times” is not used for a particular moment but for a period of time)
Some more examples:
all day fog
a buoy marks
our place in time
Kristen Lindquist
(fog sustains for a longer period than a moment)
You may wish to read the commentary on this poem here:
seventh month
whispering nongendered names
to her belly
Randy Brooks
blue hour
a door opens
to my past
Gregory Longenecker
golden hour
grandfather candles
the old jack pine
Terry L. French
mayflies . . .
casting a line the length
of my lunch hour
Chad Lee Robinson
half time
my son and I exchange
our goal posts
Srinivasa Rao Sambangi
(half time here indicates middle age, may be 45 years’ duration and also the half time of a soccer game)
Prompt:
Please write one or two haiku with time as a measurement. Note the subtle difference between time as a moment and time as a measurement. In case of doubt, please see the examples given again
Thanks to Joanna Ashwell for suggesting this topic
KIGO WORDS
Shall we please try to include a kigo word in all the poems we share here?
Give the season and the word — under your poem.
For seasonal references, please check these lists:
“A Dictionary of Haiku Classified by Season Words with Traditional and Modern Methods,” by Jane Reichhold:
indian subcontinent SAIJIKI:
The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words:
The World Kigo Database:
The Yuki Teikei Haiku Season Word List:
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Dear poets,
Please provide your feedback on others' commentary and poems as well.
We are continuing haikaiTALKS in full swing!
Keep writing and commenting! _kala

in this motherless time
i plant dahlias
without garden gloves
Alicia Samson
Sweden via South Africa
So many beautiful haiku here, truly inspiring 💛
#2
second year of frost —
the orchard learns
to bloom in silence
Jacek Margolak, Poland
#1
July sun —
yet another look
at the grocery list
Rashmi Buragohain
India
#1
summer noon
outside the AC train
my wet towel dries
Mohua Maulik, India