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haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering! 2nd August 2025

haikaiTALKS: Japanese aesthetics: Fueki-ryūkō – The unchanging and ever-changing| a saturday gathering under the banyan tree


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If anyone feels that it is similar to another haikai, they are encouraged to contact the relevant poet directly.

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Special Guest Poet: Keiko Izawa

host: Srinivasa Sambangi 2nd August 2025


haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering under the banyan tree

Your Guest Poet for AUGUST for haikaiTALKS: Keiko Izawa


haikaiTALKS August 2025

 

Japanese aesthetics: Fueki-ryūkō – The unchanging and ever-changing

 

Fueki-ryūkō – The unchanging and ever-changing

 

Fueki-ryūko is one of the concepts advocated by Matsuo Basho, and the term consists of two opposite words: fueki (不易) and ryūkō (流行)


Fueki refers to what is constant, timeless, and universal – the enduring essence of beauty, nature, and human emotion.  Ryūkō refers to what is transient, fashionable, or changing – the expression, style, or cultural forms that shift with time.


Basho emphasized the importance of respecting tradition while also embracing innovation(atarashimi) – much like the saying, “Explore the old to understand the new.”  He believed that haiku should evolve by incorporating fresh expressions without losing its essence, teaching that great poetry must balance both timeless truth and timely expression.

 

This week you are requested to write up to two haiku expressing the concept of fueki-ryūkō.

As usual, try to include kigo in the links at the bottom. Your local kigo are also welcome.

 

Samples:

 

autumn again

the crossword puzzle

already filled in


~ John  Stevenson

 


in and out of the surf

the retriever

out-retrieves itself


~ Scot Mason

 


first frost –

my voice enters

the automated system


~ Jim Kacian

 

snow falling –

the interstate sign

flashes amber

~ Lee Gurga

 

 

“A Dictionary of Haiku Classified by Season Words with Traditional and Modern Methods,” by Jane Reichhold:

 

Indian subcontinent SAIJIKI:

 

The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words:

 

The World Kigo Database:

 

The Yuki Teikei Haiku Season Word List:

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Thanks, Keiko! Another beautiful post. Thanks a lot.

I hope our poets take the challenge and create a haiku on these lines! Keenly looking ahead to this month.

Greatly indebted to you.

Dear Members,

Please give your feedback on others' commentary and poems, too. _()_

We are continuing haikaiTALKS in a grand manner!

Keep writing and commenting! _kala

188 Comments


Rupa Anand
Rupa Anand
Aug 08, 2025

Poem 1 - 08/08/25

Self Edit:

summer mosquitos

i swing the swatter

this way & that

Rupa Anand, New Delhi, India

feedback, yes

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Original:,

mosquitoes

an electric racquet

does its job

Rupa Anand, New Delhi, India

feedback welcome

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Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
Aug 08, 2025
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The concept is included, but this ku seems a bit like reading an instruction manual…?

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Ron C. Moss
Ron C. Moss
Aug 08, 2025

haiku#2


rescue chopper

i twirl a gum leaf

by its stem


Ron C. Moss

Tasmania, Australia

Comments Welcomed


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Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
Aug 10, 2025
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You’re so welcome, Ron.

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Kalyanee
Kalyanee
Aug 07, 2025

08.08.2025

#1

Revision. Thank you, Keiko.


hazy sky

a new AI tool

on my laptop


Kalyanee Arandhara

Assam, India


Original:

grey clouds

trying out an AI tool

on my laptop


Kalyanee Arandhara

Assam, India


Feedback most welcome

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Kalyanee
Kalyanee
Aug 08, 2025
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Thank you, Keiko. I'll revise as you've suggested.

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Ron C. Moss
Ron C. Moss
Aug 07, 2025

haiku#1


death vows . . .

wasted wedding berries

in a crystal bowl


Ron C. Moss

Tasmania, Australia


I was inspired and maybe scarred for life as a young child watching the amazing Charles Dickins',Great Epectations 1946 movie. The cobweb covered bride and decaying wedding feast once seen, can never be forgotten.


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Ron C. Moss
Ron C. Moss
Aug 08, 2025
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Thanks so much Keiko for taking the time to dive deep into this one and clarifying the various aesthetics used.

Warm wishes and bows 🙇‍♀️


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Fatma Zohra Habis
Aug 07, 2025

#2 07/08

Revision 1 Thanks a lot Keiko 🌹


intersection

      snowlight

tinged red


Fatma Zohra Habis/ Algeria


The original


for a moment

all the traffic lights turn red—

snowlight


Feedback welcome 🌹


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Fatma Zohra Habis
Aug 07, 2025
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Thank you so much Joanna 🌹 ❤️

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