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haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering! 25th April 2026

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haikaiTALKS: Japanese aesthetics and YOU|a saturday gathering under the banyan tree


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haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering under the banyan tree

25th April 2026

 

Japanese aesthetics and YOU


Dear members,


First and foremost, I thank Keiko for being with us for all these months. Not only sharing her knowledge, but being here most faithfully through the month, with the poems posted here, in her gentle way. Now, this week, we are alone without here - a child at her first day of school - learning to fend for herself.


Shall we all try to take one aesthetic nuance we have done here, give a brief explanation of what that nuance is (in your own words), quote one example from Keiko's lessons, and post your haiku? Give it a shot.

Please comment on others' poems.

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KIGO WORDS

Shall we please try to include a kigo word in all the poems we share here?

Give the season and the word — under your poem. 


I'm quoting Lev Hart's request here: "This week’s goal is to compose two verses with toriawase, blending wabi, sabi, karumi, mono no aware, and/or yugen. Tell us which aesthetic concepts you mean to express in a line below the verse. Strive for originality. Avoid stock phrases and shopworn images."


For seasonal references, please check these lists:

“A Dictionary of Haiku Classified by Season Words with Traditional and Modern Methods,” by Jane Reichhold:


indian subcontinent SAIJIKI:


The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words:


The World Kigo Database:

 

The Yuki Teikei Haiku Season Word List:


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I hope our poets take the challenge and create a haiku on these lines! Keenly looking forward to this week!!

                                                

Dear Members,

So, let's keep trying.

Please provide your feedback on others' commentary and poems as well.

We are continuing haikaiTALKS in full swing!

Keep writing and commenting! _kala


93 Comments


Rupa Anand
Rupa Anand
2 hours ago

Poem 1- 27/04/26


sweet pea twining

the garden gate

rusty and creaky


Rupa Anand, New Delhi, India

Season: Spring

Kigo: sweet pea

Aesthetic: Mujo

Attempt to show sweet pea tendrils in and out the wrought iron gate that is a trifle rusted and unpainted. L 2 acts as a pivot.

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Lorraine Haig
6 hours ago

#2


train strike . . .

a kookaburra cackles

in spring rain


Lorraine Haig, Aust.


Toriawase + karumi

karumi - Lightness. It leaves a space for the reader to become an imaginative participant.

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#2


spring thaw —

the fence wire

sags a little


Season: Spring

Kigo: spring thaw

Aesthetics: mujō, mono no aware

Toriawase: seasonal thaw vs. subtle change in the fence


My chosen nuance: MUJŌ (impermanence)


For me, mujō appears in small, almost unnoticed shifts — when something quietly gives way.


From Keiko’s lessons, I was drawn to the idea that change should arise from the image itself, without explanation.


Jacek Margolak, Poland

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
12 hours ago
Replying to

Lovely, Jacek.

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#2

 

short-lived stars

a snow storm

strikes the pylon

 

Joanna Ashwell

UK

 

Kigo – snow

 

Toriawase

 

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lev hart
lev hart
a day ago
  1. 2026-04-26


winter rain

the bus shelter full

of sheep


Lev Hart, Canada

Kigo: winter rain.

Traditional aesthetic value: toriawase. "Combine elements that seem unrelated or contrasting rather than similar ones, to create fresh meaning and resonance" (Keiko Izwa).

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Lorraine Haig
12 hours ago
Replying to

What a great example of toriawase Lev.

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