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haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering! 20th December 2025 Billee Dee

haikaiTALKS: The Quiet Edges of Presence: a Winter Sabi Series|a saturday gathering under the banyan tree


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Special Guest Poet: Billie Dee

host: Srinivasa Sambangi 20th December 2025


haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering under the banyan tree

December's Guest Poet: Billie Dee And she's helping us view Winter Sabi!


haikaiTALKS 


The Quiet Edges of Presence: a Winter Sabi Series

Across hemispheres, winter is less a single season than a mood—a thinning of light, a sharpening of textures, a soft deceleration at the edges of our days. Whether cold or warm, wet or dry, winter is when presence becomes more audible in the small, unguarded moments: thresholds of identity, the residue of shared rooms, the grain of familiar tasks, and the slowed breath of living things.

Sabi is not about sorrow.  It is the felt texture of time brushing lightly against us. This new four-week cycle invites you into those subtle thresholds where nothing dramatic happens, yet everything is quietly revealed.

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December 20 — Grain of the World: Texture, Scent, Slow Motion


Presence lives in texture and repetition. In winter, the hand’s work and the body’s small movements become windows into time unfolding through action, not thought.


fallen eucalypt …

the scent

cut into stove lengths


— Jo McInerney



kick by kick

the stone’s shadow evolving


— Chad Lee Robinson



intermission—

a fly on the piano

walks a full scale


— Carole MacRury


PROMPT: Notice a repeated small action today — chopping, stirring, sweeping. Write a haiku built on touch or scent. Let the body think for you.


_()_ Namaste, Billee Dee


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“A Dictionary of Haiku Classified by Season Words with Traditional and Modern Methods,” by Jane Reichhold:

 

Indian subcontinent SAIJIKI:

 

The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words:

 

The World Kigo Database:

 

The Yuki Teikei Haiku Season Word List:

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Thanks, Billie. Your notes, the examples you have given and your prompt are so breathtakingly stunning. Thank you so much. I hope more poets try to see 'sabi' the way you have so superbly expressed.

Dear Members,

Waiting for your responses.

Please provide your feedback on others' commentary and poems as well. _()_

We are continuing haikaiTALKS in full swing!

Keep writing and commenting! _kala

3 Comments


Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
44 minutes ago

#1


winter rain

mother’s calligraphy

nowhere to store


Keiko Izawa, Japan

Feedback welcome

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
an hour ago

twilight the crowd jostling him

into the subway


Kala Ramesh #1 Feedback welcome

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Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
25 minutes ago
Replying to

Kala,

“Twilight” often has an autumnal feel in haiku, so I personally sense less of a winter sabi mood here…

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