haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering! 20th December 2025 Billee Dee
- Kala Ramesh

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haikaiTALKS: The Quiet Edges of Presence: a Winter Sabi Series|a saturday gathering under the banyan tree
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Special Guest Poet: Billie Dee
host: Srinivasa Sambangi 20th December 2025
haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering under the banyan tree
December's Guest Poet: Billie Dee And she's helping us view Winter Sabi!
haikaiTALKS
The Quiet Edges of Presence: a Winter Sabi Series
Across hemispheres, winter is less a single season than a mood—a thinning of light, a sharpening of textures, a soft deceleration at the edges of our days. Whether cold or warm, wet or dry, winter is when presence becomes more audible in the small, unguarded moments: thresholds of identity, the residue of shared rooms, the grain of familiar tasks, and the slowed breath of living things.
Sabi is not about sorrow. It is the felt texture of time brushing lightly against us. This new four-week cycle invites you into those subtle thresholds where nothing dramatic happens, yet everything is quietly revealed.
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December 20 — Grain of the World: Texture, Scent, Slow Motion
Presence lives in texture and repetition. In winter, the hand’s work and the body’s small movements become windows into time unfolding through action, not thought.
fallen eucalypt …
the scent
cut into stove lengths
— Jo McInerney
kick by kick
the stone’s shadow evolving
— Chad Lee Robinson
intermission—
a fly on the piano
walks a full scale
— Carole MacRury
PROMPT: Notice a repeated small action today — chopping, stirring, sweeping. Write a haiku built on touch or scent. Let the body think for you.
_()_ Namaste, Billee Dee
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“A Dictionary of Haiku Classified by Season Words with Traditional and Modern Methods,” by Jane Reichhold:
Indian subcontinent SAIJIKI:
The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words:
The World Kigo Database:
The Yuki Teikei Haiku Season Word List:
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Thanks, Billie. Your notes, the examples you have given and your prompt are so breathtakingly stunning. Thank you so much. I hope more poets try to see 'sabi' the way you have so superbly expressed.
Dear Members,
Waiting for your responses.
Please provide your feedback on others' commentary and poems as well. _()_
We are continuing haikaiTALKS in full swing!
Keep writing and commenting! _kala

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winter rain
mother’s calligraphy
nowhere to store
Keiko Izawa, Japan
Feedback welcome
twilight the crowd jostling him
into the subway
Kala Ramesh #1 Feedback welcome