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haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering! 14th February 2026 Guest poet: Keiko Izawa

haikaiTALKS: Japanese aesthetics: Shibumi|a saturday gathering under the banyan tree


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Special Guest Poet: Keiko Izawa

host: Srinivasa Sambangi


haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering under the banyan tree



haikaiTALKS  14th February 2026

 

Japanese aesthetics: Shibumi


Shibumi, also referred to as shibusa, embodies an aesthetic of emptiness

that holds deep significance. The frequent use of plain colors illustrates this

preference for simplicity. For example, in tea bowls, this simplicity is a key

aesthetic choice. As emotional intensity rises, the yearning for simplicity

becomes even more evident. Although there are some painted

embellishments, the overall aesthetic remains understated.

(The Beauty of Shibusa,by Yanagi Muneyoshi)


Shibumi does not refer to glamour or flamboyance; instead, it signifies a

serene, composed and profound essence. This aesthetic concept applies

to various contexts, including human interactions, physical objects,

natural environments and verbal communication. It adds a subtle nuance

that gives these elements a sense of depth and dignity.


This week, you are requested to write up to two haiku that express

shibumi.


Samples:


柿食えば 鐘が鳴るなり 法隆寺

kaki kueba / kane ga naru nari / hōryūji


biting into a persimmon

the bell tolls

at hōryūji


~ Masaoka Shiki




ブランデー 多めの紅茶 冬星座

burandē / ōme no kōcha / fuyu seiza


tea

with extra brandy . . .

winter constellations




月光の 白き吐息や 霧深し

gekkō no / shiroki toiki ya / kiri fukashi


white breath

of moonlight –

deepening fog




この窓は 銀河のほとり ヒアシンス

kono mado wa / ginga no hotori / hiashinsu



this window

at the edge of the galaxy . . .

hyacinths



As usual, try to use kigo from the lists below. You can also use your local

season words that are not listed here.


“A Dictionary of Haiku Classified by Season Words with Traditional and

Modern Methods,” by Jane Reichhold:

69da920530f8.pdf


Indian subcontinent SAIJIKI:


The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words:


The World Kigo Database:


The Yuki Teikei Haiku Season Word List:



Thanks, Keiko! Another beautiful post. Thanks a lot.

I hope our poets take the challenge and create a haiku on these lines! Keenly looking ahead to this month.

Greatly indebted to you.

                                                

Dear Members,

Please provide your feedback on others' commentary and poems as well.

We are continuing haikaiTALKS in full swing!

Keep writing and commenting! _kala


4 Comments


Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
15 minutes ago

This week’s theme is challenging, but once this aesthetic is internalized, you may find that your haiku begin to carry a quiet elegance.


The opposite of shibumi is self-display.

Shibumi does not try to be noticed. Showiness wants to be seen immediately.


Showy beauty

• vivid

• dramatic

• attention-seeking

• impressive

• designed to attract


instant impact



Shibumi

• quiet

• restrained

• unassuming

• inward

• discovered slowly


   lasting depth

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Katherine E Winnick
Katherine E Winnick
20 minutes ago

#1


winter shower -

raindrops patter

upon the pavement


Kigo : winter shower


Katherine E Winnick

Brighton UK


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Artur Zieliński
Artur Zieliński
an hour ago

#1


stone Buddha –

in spring mist

rice steams


kigo: spring mist

Artur Zielinski/Poland

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Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
7 minutes ago
Replying to

Perhaps:


spring mist . . .

across the stone Buddha

steaming rice

?

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