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haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering! 13th December 2025 Billee Dee

Updated: Dec 13, 2025

haikaiTALKS: The Quiet Edges of Presence: a Winter Sabi Series|a saturday gathering under the banyan tree


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Special Guest Poet: Billie Dee

host: Srinivasa Sambangi 13th December 2025


haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering under the banyan tree

December's Guest Poet: Billie Dee And she's helping us view Sabi from a fresh perspective!


haikaiTALKS 


The Quiet Edges of Presence: a Winter Sabi Series

Across hemispheres, winter is less a single season than a mood—a thinning of light, a sharpening of textures, a soft deceleration at the edges of our days. Whether cold or warm, wet or dry, winter is when presence becomes more audible in the small, unguarded moments: thresholds of identity, the residue of shared rooms, the grain of familiar tasks, and the slowed breath of living things.

Sabi is not about sorrow.  It is the felt texture of time brushing lightly against us. This new four-week cycle invites you into those subtle thresholds where nothing dramatic happens, yet everything is quietly revealed. after the guests

the sound of the sea

in the shells

— Claire Everett


crackling beach fire—

we hum in place of words

we can’t recall

— Michael Dylan Welch


yard sale

the empty fishbowl

still wet

— Peter Newton



PROMPT: Think of a shared space or moment. Write from what was left behind: an echo, a damp ring, a tilt in a chair. Let the residue tell the story.


_()_ Namaste, Billee Dee


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“A Dictionary of Haiku Classified by Season Words with Traditional and Modern Methods,” by Jane Reichhold:

 

Indian subcontinent SAIJIKI:

 

The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words:

 

The World Kigo Database:

 

The Yuki Teikei Haiku Season Word List:

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Thanks, Billie. Your notes, the examples you have given and your prompt are so breathtakingly stunning. Thank you so much. I hope more poets try to see 'sabi' the way you have so superbly expressed.

Dear Members,

Waiting for your responses.

Please provide your feedback on others' commentary and poems as well. _()_

We are continuing haikaiTALKS in full swing!

Keep writing and commenting! _kala

178 Comments


Jennifer Gurney
Dec 25, 2025

#1 12-25-25


your voice mails

on my old phone

my Christmas present


Jennifer Gurney, US

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C.X. Turner
C.X. Turner
Dec 19, 2025

19/12/25


duvet heap

another night

on the sofa


C.X. Turner, U.K.

(feedback always welcome)

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Billie Dee
Billie Dee
Dec 19, 2025

#2-17Dec25


white lace at the edge of blue freezing tarn


--Billie Dee Tacoma, Washington, USA


(feedback welcome)

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Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
Dec 19, 2025
Replying to

A beautifully crafted ku, but to me it leans more toward wabi than winter sabi, perhaps due to the visual delicacy of L1 and L2…. Just a thought.

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Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
Dec 18, 2025

#2


Revision with thanks to Billie:

fading foghorn . . .

the taste

of last night’s stew

Original:


fading foghorn . . .

the taste

of last night stew


Keiko Izawa, Japan

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Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
Dec 19, 2025
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Thank you, Billie. Will edit.

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Kalyanee
Kalyanee
Dec 18, 2025

18.12.2025

#2


pearl string

a chain of moments

in the old album


Kalyanee Arandhara

Assam, India


Feedback most welcome

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