writeALONG! 6 January

host: Muskaan Ahuja

"Good writing is bad writing well edited."

---- Kevin Ashton

As soon as a creative piece is written, it becomes crucial to get ready for revision for it is equally a part of the creative design.

There are two poems, below that need revision. They may also be changed and altered at will. Ask yourself: Is the punctuation correct? Can words be deleted? Are the images too close or too distant? and so on. Dive in, subtract and add to keep the poems in balance!


Blossoms flitter down,

Blowing the way the wind blows,

A burst of bright colour.


Flowers in the ground

Withered, gnarled, turning brown

Fading back to dust.

Looking forward to your polished versions...

Happy Writing!


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