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triveni spotlight: 15th May 2023

triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh GUEST EDITOR: Bryan Rickert



the transparent wings

of a dragonfly

my daughter’s

attempt

to manipulate me



Susan Burch

Failed Haiku. 7.82


This month is going to be a treat for our members. _()_ Thank you so much, Bryan.

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I love how the whole things is pivoted delicately on 'transparent' - a master at work.

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Love it! Who hasn’t been there either as a parent or child?

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
May 15, 2023

Susan has a voice that can't be mistaken! Brilliant and I love this too!

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Reid Hepworth
Reid Hepworth
May 15, 2023

Brilliant! Love this!

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