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triveni spotlight: 15th June 2023

triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh GUEST EDITOR: Lakshmi Iyer, June 2023



day’s end

the symmetry of

the chiropractor’s cactus


Keiko Izawa

Modern Haiku vol.38.3, Autumn 2007



Hello readers,


There are moments of surprise in the poems hidden in between the time and space that breathes and echoes a voice of the universe. Unlock the door to the poem that stirs to startle you for a minute. Walk through them. Question the perception and resonate that with your experience. What makes you pause?



This month is going to be very interesting. Watch out for this space, every alternate day! Thank you, Lakshmi. We are waiting to see the month unfold. _()_

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Meera Rehm
Meera Rehm
2023年6月15日

It's beautiful. Thanks Keiko for the extra note. Kudo to your creative mind!

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Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
2023年6月15日
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Thank you Meera!

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
2023年6月15日

Thanks Keiko, a lovely poem, deep and thoughtful.


from Keiko


“I regularly visit my chiropractor, and one day I noticed this cactus at the entrance had a perfect symmetry. I glanced at it with some envy because my vertebra is somewhat deformed, and needless to say his job is easing/curing pain caused by such deformation of body parts. So the symmetry also amused me with the ideal form of chiropractors when explored. At the same time the perfect symmetry of this cactus brought to my mind some unexplainable calmness and peace at the day’s end…"


Thank you!

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
2023年6月16日
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Beautiful

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wanda amos
wanda amos
2023年6月15日

Certainly resonates with me as recently having to spend time at the chiropractor - hopefully my symmetry will be restored like the cactus

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Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
2023年6月15日
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Thank you Wanda🌵

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Kala Ramesh
Kala Ramesh
2023年6月14日

Good one, Keiko! Most beautifully worded.

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Keiko Izawa
Keiko Izawa
2023年6月14日
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Thanks Kala.

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Bonnie J Scherer
Bonnie J Scherer
2023年6月14日

I appreciate the note to the readers. We are encouraged to spend time with a poem to discover what resonates with us. ❤️

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