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triveni spotlight: 15th July 2023

triveni spotlight A FEATURE EVERY ALTERNATE DAY! hosts: Teji Sethi and Kala Ramesh GUEST EDITOR: Nandita Jain Mahajan, July 2023


unfinished dream—

a chrysanthemum blooms

in the tatami room


Chiyo-ni



mother’s pincushion

a grove of marking needles

starts to bloom


Fay Aoyagi



Thank you for giving me an opportunity to present my selection. Though the task of selecting haiku for Triveni Spotlight was very difficult, I found it very rewarding. I spent several hours going through poems available in the public domain and those from books in my personal collection. I read and re-read, shortlisted again and again paring down the list till I could do no more. It was a sheer joy to read such fantastic works - my heart is full ... so happy.

I tried to keep the poems different from what other guest editors had selected earlier. However, there is bound to be some repetition. I found myself leaning towards old Japanese masters like Basho, Issa, Shiki, and Ryokan but equally drawn to women poets like Chiyo-ni and Rengetsu. The simplicity, charm, and timeless quality is what pull me to their haiku. What a picture they paint! And, the space between what is said and what is unsaid. So many different interpretations which helped me connect to these poems.

Amongst the contemporary poets, I found myself opting for those that tugged at my heart. The poems span longing, sadness, hopelessness, hope, love, and gentleness. These are those that I could read over and over again, especially at dusk, when my mind is quiet and at peace. And then, something interesting happened. I realised that I could pair the masters with the contemporary - similar thoughts and subjects but different treatment. I hope you enjoy this selection. Nandita Jain Mahajan


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What a unique and refreshing way of handling this month's triveni spotlight selections! Watch out for this space, every alternate day, dear readers, you are in for a real treat! Thank you, Nandita. We are waiting to see the month unfold. _()_

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Anna Maria
Anna Maria
16. Juli 2023

Beautiful poems. Thanks Nanita!

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Padma  Rajeswari
Padma Rajeswari
16. Juli 2023

beautiful poems Nandita, so many layers to mother's pin cushion.. loved it

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Thank you Padma. Do share your understanding if you find time. Would love to read your views.

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Such a lovely comparison of (to me) evocative poems. There's so much going on in both the poems.

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lakshmi iyer
lakshmi iyer
15. Juli 2023

Beautiful Nandita!!

Both 'blooms' are unique and speak of so many things.


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You are so right Lakshmi!

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Arvinder Kaur
Arvinder Kaur
15. Juli 2023

Amazing poems. Thanks Nandita.

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Thank you Arvinder! I am very fond of both poets.

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