A TUESDAY FEATURE
hosts: Muskaan Ahuja, K.Ramesh
guest editor: Nandita Mahajan
Only the unpublished poems (that are never published on any social media platform/journals/anthologies) posted here for each prompt will be considered for Triveni Haikai India's monthly journal -- haikuKATHA, each month.
Poets are requested to post poems (haiku/senryu) that adhere to the prompts/exercises given.
Only 1 poem to be posted in 24 hours. Total 2 poems per poet are allowed each week (numbered 1,2). So, revise your poems till 'words obey your call'.
If a poet wants feedback, then the poet must mention 'feedback welcome' below each poem that is being posted.
Responses are usually a mixture of grain and chaff. The poet has to be discerning about what to take for the final version of the poem or the unedited version will be picked up for the journal.
The final version should be on top of the original version for selection.
Poetry is a serious business. Give you best attempt to feature in haikuKATHA !!
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‘Loneliness expresses the pain of being alone and solitude expresses the glory of being alone.’ — Paul Tillich
one by one
everyone has left
autumn wind
— Kobayashi Issa
twilight
is left
in the maple leaves
—Chiyo-ni
past sundown —
every moment
a deeper blue
— Zach Morgan
Do you sense loneliness or solitude in the above? Examine each and think why.
When was the last time you felt lonely and sad?
When was the last time you were alone and happy?
I invite you to express loneliness or solitude in a haiku. What impact did writing the experience have on you? Did you learn something about yourself?
#2 6-18-24
stretched thin
threadbare
my heart
Jennifer Gurney, US
#2
18-06-2024
dark clouds
flashing thunder randomly...
I wait for the rain
Padma Priya
India
feedback welcome
#1
the old man
still complaining
his empty chair
Dipankar Dasgupta india (Feedback welcome.)
What a collection of poems in the prompt! I am sure that this week will produce a flood of moving poems.
17.06.2024
#2
wee hours -
plaintive notes on a flute
getting fainter
Kalyanee Arandhara
Assam, India
Feedback most welcome