haikaiTALKS: a saturday gathering! TWO-LINE haiku

haikaiTALKS: ONE-LINE HAIKU - a saturday gathering_under the banyan tree

host: Kala Ramesh

24th June 2023

I have a new request and a suggestion to make.

Can you share a two-line ku that you've enjoyed & tell your readers why you liked it and how you understood it. For your own poems: Only THREE two-line ku per week, per prompt, per poet.

First post: You'll search and find a two-line haiku, you like.

You'll give your reason/s why you like it. Second post: This will be your two-line ku.

Third post: This will be your second 2-line ku.

Fourth post: This will be your third 2-line ku.

Please give your feedback on others' commentary and poems too. _()_

Sample poems:

Within life and death

Snow falls ceaselessly

---- Santōka Taneda

Mountain Tasting, Translated by John Stevens Have fun! Keep writing and commenting!