haikaiTALKS: haiku and more! a saturday gathering_under the banyan tree
host: Kala Ramesh
6 May, 2023
I have a new request and a suggestion to make.
From now on - you will take a one-line ku and read and internalise it. Then tell your readers how you understood it. For your own poems: Only two one-line ku per week, per prompt, per poet.
First post: When you post, you'll make your first post as a comment on anyone one-line, which is posted as an example.
You'll give your reason/s why you like it or why you don't like it. Whether you understand it or not. Second post: This will be your one-line ku.
Third post: this will be your 2nd poem. Please give your feedback on others' commentary and poems too.
_()_ For better interaction, please stagger your posts. Only one haiku can be posted per day (in 24 hourse) in all our forums.
Sample poems:
deep autumn silence in the landline phone Srini S Bones journal for the short verse no. 24 October 2022
calmer under her sixty new pounds of medicine weight
Laurinda Lind Bones journal for the short verse no. 24 October 2022
night shore how search engines shape our world
Beate Conrad
Bones journal for the short verse no. 25 April 2023
Enjoy!